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PostPosted: Thu May 26, 2005 1:38 am    Post subject: a few corrections Reply with quote

Can someone help me out, I need someone to read over this and edit it. the english words (which I don't know how to say) are in brackets. Thanks.


Le livre commence (on may 24, 1863). Le professeur Lidenbrok (rushes into) sa petit maison situee au numero 19 de Konng-strasse dens hamburg. C'est tres vieux. Le professure est Axel's Oncle(adpoted). Le professure (was teaching at Johannaeum delivering lectures on Mineralolgy). Dans minerologe ( there is many half greek and latin words). Le professure est tres celebre dans le collages. Le professure est un (excellent German professor. The house was his own, and everything in it). Dans (his house lived his god-daughter Gräuben, a young Virlandaise of seventeen, Martha, and Axel his nephew and an orphan. Axel est le professure's laboratory assistant. Axel aide Le professure par organise les livres et les roches. (soon Le professure called Axel to his study room to show him his discovery)
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PostPosted: Thu May 26, 2005 8:29 am    Post subject: Re: a few corrections Reply with quote

mike wrote:
Can someone help me out, I need someone to read over this and edit it. the english words (which I don't know how to say) are in brackets. Thanks.


Le livre commence le 24 mai 1863 (on may 24, 1863). Le professeur Lidenbrok se précipita dans (rushes into) sa petite maison situee au numero 19 de Konng-strasse à hamburg. C'était une très vieille maison. Le professeur est l'oncle d'Axel (adpoted) Confused . Le professeur enseignait la minéralogie à Johannaeum (was teaching at Johannaeum delivering lectures on Mineralolgy). En minéralogie, il y a beaucoup de mots venant du latin ou du grec ( there is many half greek and latin words). Le professeur a une bonne réputation à l'université. Le professeur est un excellent professeur allemand (excellent German professor. The house was his own, and everything in it). Dans sa maison vivaient sa filleule Grauben, une jeune Virlandaise de 17 ans, Martha, son neveu Axel et un orphelin (his house lived his god-daughter Gräuben, a young Virlandaise of seventeen, Martha, and Axel his nephew and an orphan. Axel est l'assistant du laboratoire du professeur professure's laboratory assistant. Axel aide le professeur en classant les livres et les pierres. Le professeur appela Axel dans sa salle d'étude pour lui montrer sa découverte(soon Le professure called Axel to his study room to show him his discovery)
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PostPosted: Thu May 26, 2005 8:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That's a weird story
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PostPosted: Fri May 27, 2005 12:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks but the story is actually, Journey to the Center of the Earth
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PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 1:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

here is another one, this story is even weirder, Thanks again


Le livre commence avec Max et ses copains, Jerome et Simon. Ils construient une cabane. Max a fait tombe les clous et ses copains (tells max to leave because he was very clumby). Quand Max est arrive dans (his house(is it chez lui??) ), il cree un beaucoup de desordre. La mere de Max pense une excellent idee. Elle telephone ses cousins. Prochainment, ses cousins sont arrive dans (his house). Victor(max's oldest cousin) decide a aider Max a cree une cabane. Ils decident a construit la cabane pres ses amis cabain. Max et Victor finissent la cabane (after dinner and decides to camp out). Un peu plus tard dans le nuit, la tempete destruit ses copain's cabane. Max et Victor decident a aider ses amies et inviter ses amis a leur cabane.
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PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 9:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

zmike wrote:
here is another one, this story is even weirder, Thanks again


Le livre commence avec Max et ses copains, Jerome et Simon. Ils construisent une cabane. Max a fait tomber des clous et ses copains lui disent de partir car il est très Question (tells max to leave because he was very clumby). Arrivé chez lui (his house(is it chez lui??) ), Max fait de nouveau des bêtises. La mere de Max a alors une excellent idee. Elle telephone à ses cousins. Peu après, ses cousins arrivent chez Max. Victor, le cousin ainé de Max(max's oldest cousin) decide d'aider Max a construire une cabane, près de celle des amis de Max. Max et Victor finissent la cabane après le diner et décident de camper là (after dinner and decides to camp out). Un peu plus tard dans la nuit, la tempete détruit la cabane des amis de Max. Max et Victor decident de les aider et les invitent dans leur cabane.
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