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CAn someone check the grammar for this

 
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 9:40 pm    Post subject: CAn someone check the grammar for this Reply with quote

CAn someone check the grammar for this

IN THE PAST THIS criminel has commited
Le criminel est un homme dans trente ans. Il volait au mussee d'art. Il volait bijoux magasin. Il a continue a vole. Il est un public enemy numero un, et un voleur. Il a fait chanter et a infecte le ordinateurs dans le banque. LA semaine passee, le criminel a vole des tableaux celebres et des sculptures a la Galerie. Les oeuvres ont une valeur totale des trois mill le lieu de crime est grande hall, le crimeinel lassie un petit cheveux. Pendant le crime, le crimeinel se tenir a chaise
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I want to try well to correct it to you:

Dans le passé, ce que le criminel a commis

Le criminel est un homme de trente ans. Il volait des musées d'arts. Il volait des bijoux dans les magasins. Il a continué à voler. Il est l'ennemi public numero un, et un voleur. Il a fait chanter et a infecté les ordinateurs de la banque. La semaine passée, le criminel a volé des tableaux célèbres et des sculptures de la Galerie. Les oeuvres ont une valeur totale des trois milles (which is the currency to use? dollars, euros, francs..?? ). Le lieu du crime est le grand hall, le criminel laissa un petit cheveux.

Sorry but I don't understand the last sentence, what you want to say??

"Pendant le crime, le criminel se tenir a chaise"

I don't speak very well english. I hope to have been able to help you and have translated as you wanted it.

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 15, 2005 12:17 am    Post subject: thanks Reply with quote

thanks, merci
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